He was Broken & Frustrated,
So much that He wanted to End all this,
He wanted to End his Life…
With a Blade in his Hand,
He wept silently in a corner of his Room,
hoping SomeOne would come & Hug him tight…
But now, he wanted to Cease the Fight,
He wanted to End his Life…
Within a fraction of a second,
The Blade met his Wrist…
He closed his Eyes,
Finally, He was Ending his Life…
From Worst to Best,
Memories crossed his mind,
Some faces he Recognized, Some he didn’t want to…
He let Death win over him & left the World with many UnAnswered Questions,
Finally, He Ended all this,
He Ended his Life!
#DarShu :)
Its very deep
We all went through this feeling in our life
To describe it in some words
Its amazing
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Thank You!
and I am glad that you liked it! π
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Very nice. Different with the bold words and all
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Thank You π
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Quite welcome my friend. Good stuff
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Reblogged this on Alabarakah.
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Thank You so Much!
I am Happy that you Liked it! πππ
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ur welcm
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Awesome…..
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Thank You! ππ
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Your welcm darshuππ
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Amazing.Loved reading it.
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Thank You..! π
Glad you liked it.. βΊ
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That is sad :(
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Indeed too Sad π₯
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Beautiful…. Though painful.. π
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Indeed π₯
Thank You for Reading βΊ
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Nooooooo!
You can’t just end it all and get out of it so easily while we all suffer painfully for like a gazillion years! Nooooo!
My weirdness aside, you write beautifully and I’m very jealous :D
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Seems like his single day was more then a Gazillion Year, I guess its more Painfull…
Thank You & don’t be Jealous ππ
& Never keep aside your Weirdness ππππ
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Oh :(
*sigh* oh come on. I think everyone ( and I mean, Everyone!) has gone through some really really gut wrenching pain and sadness in their life. Haven’t you? But we go on living and there have been so much to be happy about.
I forgot my point. Suicide is wrong and therefore I am mad at the character who died :/
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Yeah, Suicide is wrong…
You should be Mad at him, its Right!
but as you said “We go on Living”, No Human (may be Aliens too π) in the whole World can live a single day without Hope… & its more then a Hell…
Sounds Filmy, isn’t it? π
btw I like your Perspective towards the Character & Life… βΊππ
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…..yes, it did sound filmy :D but it’s true! And thank you! ( I like my perspective too! :D )
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Hehe.. ππ
You’re very Welcome π
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With every word you’ve written there, it goes deep and deep.
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Thank You So Much ππ
Glad that you Liked it.. πππ
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Friend, take time to read my posts, i hope it’ll help you in some way…
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Sure Thing… π
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Very deep and honest!
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Thanks for Reading… ππ
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Great poem
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Thank You πππ
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brought back some intense memories, very talented great post
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Thank You so much π
& I’m very Happy to know that you “Won” the Battle…π
(if you know what I mean π)
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Heartfelt.
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Yeah.. π
Thanks for Reading π
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